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Out of reach
Contributed by
lonelyatheart
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Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 04:34:59 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Something profound, right out of reach.
I know it's there, the barrier, I try to breach.
It excites my mind and make me probe my life.
Maybe it's an idea, I search in strife.
Why can't I have it? what am I doing wrong?
I have trouble waiting. I have trouble staying strong.
I feel I'm more distant in the loneliness that I hate.
Maybe it's a delusion. WHY DO I HAVE TO WAIT!?
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2006-04-24 04:34:59]
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Re: Out of reach
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by FRANCO on
Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 07:05:57 AM AEST
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The flow in your poem is very good, though short yet conveyed your view evidently.
Regards
FRANCO
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Re: Out of reach
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 10:43:44 AM AEST
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Good poem.. I liked how you worded it and it flowed great..
take care
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