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My Life
Contributed by
BlackOrchid
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Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 03:45:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Pain is my love the fuel of my existence.
The substance that keeps me waiting, hoping, needing, craving, expecting. Souless...
Breath.
Exhale.
Once, Twice -
My eyes roll back and then I blink… Startled, quiet, searching, moaning, confused,
Alive…
With eyes wide open and yet I am blind.
Unable to see the truth ...that I hate my life ...
I dream of another but what is a dream you call a nightmare?
My Life.
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BlackOrchid
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2006-04-24 03:45:07]
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Re: My Life
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by Tiffyo4 on
Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 12:55:06 PM AEST
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very nice write sounds just like my life right now
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Re: My Life
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by Forgotten_soul on
Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 05:43:11 PM AEST
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| i like it, my life is pain and missory, thus i am not fazed when others cry. |
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Re: My Life
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by sensible_paper on
Friday, 9th November 2007 @ 12:04:11 PM AEST
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Everyone goes through this at least once in their lives but the way you described it was beautiful and you used nice imagery
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