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Friendships Garden
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 05:44:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Raindrops gentle touch
Teardrops tell much
Mourning what was lost
To the soul a high cost
Friends come and then take leave
For the loss we tend to grieve
But are thankful for the memories
And the good times we still see
But as spring starts to unfold
New horizons shine like gold
We start anew and are blessed
As the old we let take a rest
No regrets are ours
Each friend is a special flower
But some sharper thorns hold
And the pain to our hearts bold
So those we prune from garden
But towards them never our hearts harden
Just better to let go
Than more heart ache inside sow
Others are quite a delight
And shine for us ever so bright
So towards these flowers I tend
As my heart begins once more to mend
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NoSaint
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2006-04-23 17:44:23]
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Re: Friendships Garden
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by shelby on
Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 07:06:49 PM AEST
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new horizons are on the way. This is lovely.
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Re: Friendships Garden
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 07:46:32 PM AEST
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Very lovely and meaningful Shari.
In German/Austrian we have a saying:
"Another mother has a beautiful child too"
(don't let hyour heart be broken.because another mothers' child is lovely too. :-)
So wise! Don't you agree?
Love and peace
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Re: Friendships Garden
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 08:24:44 PM AEST
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An absolutely beautiful poem, Shar... I loved it..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Friendships Garden
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 11:03:29 PM AEST
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WOW!
I was entralled by this write. You never seem to lose your touch. You are such a gifted poet, and here I see all the things I have seen before from you with a stronger penatration than usual. I loved this write very much.
There was a slight sadness but a very resolved feeling in the beginning. Your final stanza opens all of that thought to hope and a great courage.
BRAVO!
Splendid as always
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Re: Friendships Garden
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 6th May 2006 @ 06:43:31 PM AEST
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yes.. lots of pretty flowers in your garden, I know you take well care of them all.. keep watering them, they still need your care...
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