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Love you in the Rain
Contributed by
Jazzy
on
Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 10:13:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Walked by you in the rain,
and had to shed some tears...
You didn't know it was me,
it's been a few years...
but I saw you and still loved you,
I kissed you in my mind...
Hoping you might miss,
what you'd left behind...
Not once did you turn,
to see my face..
Thoughts that burned,
I've been replaced...
She holds your hand,
and breathes you in...
Now your her man,
I'm just a has been...
I sleep alone,I cry alone,
I just can't take it here on my own...
So I'll live with this pain..
and every chance I get ...
I'll walk past you crying in the rain...
Till the day you see,
that it's forever,it should be...
....YOU and ME....
Copyright ©
Jazzy
... [
2006-04-23 10:13:15]
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Re: Love you in the Rain
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 11:47:03 AM AEST
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A well written and touching poem.
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Re: Love you in the Rain
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by wizard on
Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 12:52:06 PM AEST
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nice write...seems that this topic is one that never leaves us with nothing to tell.
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Re: Love you in the Rain
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by Alison on
Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 01:52:24 PM AEST
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| very well worded and moving write, great job! |
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Re: Love you in the Rain
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by vickixcee on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 01:30:18 PM AEST
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Heeey thanx for commenting on ma poem. I think its rubbish but hey.
I reeli like your style of writing, the way the lines are short. Very well written!!! 10/10 |
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