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A Meeting at the Dental Board of Control in Petrarchan Sonnet.
Contributed by
faiton
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Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 05:33:42 AM in AEST
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You stood on her neck? That breaks all our rules.
And you sir, kicked her face? What can I say,
Except to suspend you both on full pay
For making the profession look like fools.
We’ll ask you to hand in your dental tools.
We want them on our desk by end of day.
And those dental diplomas on display?
We’ll need them taking down from off your walls,
But you can keep the goldfish in your tank
We have no jurisdiction over that.
Now, sirs, leave and think about those you’ve hurt.
Oh and one last thing though it may seem rank.
Something the board discussed during our chat.
What did you see up the good lady’s skirt?
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Re: A Meeting at the Dental Board of Control in Petrarchan Sonnet.
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by JGB on
Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 01:49:21 PM AEST
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Cute.
I'm afraid of doctors and dentists. Your last two poems have now sealed it for me. |
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Re: A Meeting at the Dental Board of Control in Petrarchan Sonnet.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 02:36:10 PM AEST
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Really laughing aloud here...that beats part 1 for me.Perfectly constructed too and confirms my belief in the timeless format of the sonnet.I enjoyed that immensely,super stuff,
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Re: A Meeting at the Dental Board of Control in Petrarchan Sonnet.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 06:59:30 PM AEST
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| DOWN WITH DENTISTS! I ain't met one I'd call my best friend. They all tell me quit eatin' sugar. I hate 'em too. This guys havin' a bad day in "you're no longer welcome." Enjoyed |
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Re: A Meeting at the Dental Board of Control in Petrarchan Sonnet.
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by Spike on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 06:01:43 AM AEST
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F, a soft finish to a brilliant start (ie part1), but still pretty good.
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