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Invisble Resident
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 01:30:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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The sun is shinning
but I am inside
I sit in the window
and watch the people walk by,
I been wanting to play
talk and laugh
just enjoy life
and I got so much to say
but never no time.
I struggle with conflicts of Interest
should I live
or should I die?
love is a confusion
an illusion
a corrosion
a emotional ride.
Silently I tremble
as I pretend
everythings alright
cause
no one must know
my human side.
I have some regrets
as memories
flow through my mind
as I am chain smoking
in my prison
staying up all night.
It's starting to rain
I look out the window
and sigh...
there is a hole in my soul
and a tear in my eye.
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2006-04-23 01:30:16]
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Re: Invisble Resident
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 02:27:44 AM AEST
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So sad. Now u got me wanting to cry.
Good work as always.
huggs,
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Re: Invisble Resident
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 10:51:16 AM AEST
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Oh SecretWind this is a very feeling poem
with a hole in your soul, and a tear in your eye!
What a lovely line to show your reader how you're really feeling, and with that we feel it too!
This is sad, but somehow hopeful, I hope you're doing better today!
Warm love
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