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Hurting
Contributed by
redtears
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Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 05:02:25 PM in AEST
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Hurting
I feel my pain clutching my heart,
Causing me to choke.
The pain inside is unbearable.
I grasp my arm, clawing it.
Blood is seeping; I can’t stop crying.
I want to be able to control my pain,
On the outside I can do that,
But not on the inside,
Scars are forming, doesn’t anybody notice?
I need help, but have no other way to show it.
I wish I were dead, to stop all the hurting.
Death is near, there’s no way to avoid it.
At last! The hurting will come to an end!
redtears
April 2006
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Re: Hurting
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by Lilbabe on
Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 05:22:33 PM AEST
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i often wonder why people never notice the increasing amount of scars on my wrist. but anyways, i can really relate.
~lexy~ |
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Re: Hurting
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by ham323 on
Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 07:25:57 PM AEST
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| Hm, interesting ending. |
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Re: Hurting
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by ibelieve-dreamsonhorizon on
Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 10:21:44 AM AEST
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| hey dont give up a lot people do notice your suffering, i know a couple of people who feels the way you do. but let life draggs u down. you have to break it thru. dont you have anger, well convert it into a driving force that will succeed yourself |
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