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Free-wheeling Across The Floor
Contributed by
Lilly-Quill
on
Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 04:44:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Get me some wheels, fixed on shoes; watch me cut a rug or two.
Dreaming bursts into view, as Motown hits create heart’s new.
Lost, in majestic rhythm, entranced past a lonely crowded room.
Feeling like I own the stars, and could travel past the moon.
Always longing to gracefully fly, but nothing else is so plausible.
These wheels, of majestic wings, ignite emotions so inaudible.
Some amateur skating may be technical expertise, without heart.
With ‘a Natural’ expression is easy, creatively stepping apart.
True, some go to a rink to socialize, escaping from family-ties;
Others joyously greet the spacious floor, to physically vocalize…
I’m in heaven’s bliss rhythmically flying such inspirational wings.
Even this as an idol, I humbly surrendered to my Lord and king
Copyright ©
Lilly-Quill
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2006-04-22 16:44:16]
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Re: Free-wheeling Across The Floor
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by JGB on
Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 01:07:56 AM AEST
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| I like this. Good write. Sounds like me somewhat. |
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Re: Free-wheeling Across The Floor
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by wizard on
Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 12:04:56 PM AEST
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a most whimsical write...a smile maker.
great post
wiz |
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