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I dont know yet.....
Contributed by
bump83
on
Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 01:58:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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you try and try with all your will to ecsape
this wild ecstasey in the hands of fate
a twisted burden once its too late.
Copyright ©
bump83
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2006-04-22 13:58:28] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I dont know yet.....
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th November 2007 @ 05:12:51 AM AEST (User
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Short and sweet. Sometimes you get the message accross with few words. This is one of those times! great Job! |
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Re: I dont know yet.....
(User Rating: 1 ) by gribbs on
Sunday, 11th November 2007 @ 12:45:51 AM AEST (User
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three artistic lines to a freedom denied... |
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Re: I dont know yet.....
(User Rating: 1 ) by gribbs on
Sunday, 11th November 2007 @ 12:46:09 AM AEST (User
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three artistic lines to a freedom denied... |
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Re: I dont know yet.....
(User Rating: 1 ) by classicfailedhero on
Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 10:57:15 AM AEST (User
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nice and short- but alot more effective then some of the longer poems on this site-well done |
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