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WHY
Contributed by
BEE
on
Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 12:24:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Why
Why did you make me do this
Stay here and take this pain
You used me
And you told me you loved me
What did I do
How can I get this feeling back
How can I turn back the hands of time
Soo I can make this all good
Soo I can make are love real
you say these things
And now all they do
Is get washed away with this fear
Of trembling tears
My body has disapeared
Right off this planet
Still no one sees me
No one cares
No one trys to help me out
All I want is you back
Back between my arms
Deep in my soul
But I guess I can't have you
Becouse I'm not good enough
Your amazing
But I've lost you
Like I've flown away
Like a dove and disapeared
I lost you
BY Branden Goodrich
Copyright ©
BEE
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2006-04-22 12:24:05]
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Re: WHY
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 12:40:47 PM AEST
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oh... that's so sad. have you talked to her about your feelings? and if she caused you pain when you were together, BEE, maybe you should reconsider. i know it's not exactly my place to say anything. but, i know it hurts and will take awhile for things to be okay for you, but just try to stay in there okay? don't fall off the planet, k? it would be hard for you to get back. it was a good write and i hope everything is okay for you in the end. i wish you lots of luck! be strong! and keep up the good writing
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Re: WHY
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by Rylo on
Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 01:37:02 PM AEST
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| I feel your pain on this one, honestly I do. I have been through this many time's just as you might go through it again. Best thing to do I think, is get a good friend to help you through the hardships of these time's. One day the right one will come into your life, just have faith. |
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