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A PROPOSAL OF lOVE
Contributed by
FRANCO
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Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 10:57:15 AM in AEST
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There wasn’t a single night you failed
to adorn my divine dreams with thy
gentle charm – we sailed across the blue
sea, seated on the velvety clouds, whispering
to the cupid, burning flame of love I hold in my
heart ceaselessly for thee. Shyly fiddled a twinkling
star as I proposed to thee, my love -
the desire to rest my weary head on thy sweet bosom.
If there be another life, I plead to be with thee, gently hold
thy tender hand and never to stray afar from thee.
(FRANCO)
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FRANCO
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2006-04-22 10:57:15]
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Re: A PROPOSAL OF lOVE
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 11:04:39 AM AEST
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Awww What a tender and sweet way to propose!! I love the reference to the sea, the clouds and the twinkilng stars.....
Nicely done, my true Indian friend...:>)
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Re: A PROPOSAL OF lOVE
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 11:12:25 AM AEST
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There ain't no other answer than YES YES YES YES! Hey FRANCO, I just noticed this post between to of my own and owed ya some reads 'n' comments [thanks, btw], so thought I'd mosey over here. Glad I did. Proud to be first t' tell ya that this is a gem.
As a dumb performin' cowboy poet I had t' work a little with the word/thought line placement, but as I read it a second 'n' third time, caught on that its seems to be done fer emphasis on blue, whispering, twinkling'n' such.
Thank you for some good work and I'll bet she said yes.
Cowboy |
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Re: A PROPOSAL OF lOVE
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by JGB on
Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 04:13:56 AM AEST
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OOOoooohhhh! Franco!!!!!!!!!!!!
Didn't sail across the blue sea, but you are just so AWESOME!
I LOVE THIS! YOU AMAZE ME!
Feels like what my husband and I have. |
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Re: A PROPOSAL OF lOVE
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by Aquarius01 on
Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 01:06:49 PM AEST
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| A beatiful old fashioned love, just lovely, and so romantic...Gloria E. |
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