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Sew Myself Together Again
Contributed by
Alina
on
Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 06:35:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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emotions are rising
tears are swelling
eyes bleed a crimson cry
fears are beating
my lungs cease breathing
without you I constantly die
the stabs are re-stung
the pain is re-sung
my heart has become a martyr
ripped open, ripped out
my soul silently shouts
and your words always become harsher
they pierce and they sting
hate and cuts they do bring
i'm once again sewing together my veins
you're killing me inside
i feel like i've died
this drowning soul can't take anymore rain
and now i'm just hungover...
Copyright ©
Alina
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2006-04-21 18:35:05]
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Re: Sew Myself Together Again
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 06:56:21 PM AEST
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~*Alina*~
A thought provoking, sad and heartfelt write penned very well. You make the reader feel ur pain and emotion. Time heals all wounds. I hope and pray ur heart heals real soon.
May ur days ahead be much brighter.
*heartfelt hugs*
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: Sew Myself Together Again
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by ham323 on
Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 08:27:14 PM AEST
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| Good poem, I know how you feel. |
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Re: Sew Myself Together Again
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by crimson_regret420 on
Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 08:31:27 PM AEST
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Great write. I can really relate.
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Re: Sew Myself Together Again
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by purplestary on
Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 08:46:59 PM AEST
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this is an amazing write!!! so much pain and emotion expressed so well through words..brilliant. "the stabs are re-stung
the pain is re-sung
my heart has become a martyr"
my favorate lines..and truthfully...you don't see the word martyr...i actually had to look up the definition..and the way you used it is so powerful...and it is used in context...most of the time when i run accross a word that is not so commonly used it tends to be out of context and used completely wrong...but it worked wonderfully here...thank you! ;)
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Re: Sew Myself Together Again
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by In_a_while on
Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 07:11:08 PM AEST
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Amazing! I love your use of the darkest imagery to
convey emotion, i'm jealous. it's really wonderfully
written.
they pierce and they sting
hate and cuts they do bring
i'm once again sewing together my veins
lovely, heartbreaking, and altogether savage.
keep up the excellent writing, i'm a fan.
Dwayne |
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Re: Sew Myself Together Again
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th February 2009 @ 10:24:33 AM AEST
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just wow good written
lit it very much
cheers |
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