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Falling Out
Contributed by
luckedout
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Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 03:25:11 PM in AEST
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Always around when you need a hand
Picks you up when your feeling bad
Says you can do it for every plan
Its always nice to have them around
To bad I lost you when I left town
Never to return its a falling out
Im on the ground with no ounce of light
The air is thin and no people in sight
Now im suffocating here in the dark
No hand to grab
No words to encourage
Will I find you again?
Beacuse I need some help.
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luckedout
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2006-04-21 15:25:11]
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Re: Falling Out
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by jay89 on
Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 04:59:26 PM AEST
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i loved your poem it ws deep and very full of talent
,,,,,,,,,,at least that is how i feel
i enjoyed your poem. |
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Re: Falling Out
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd November 2007 @ 08:19:35 AM AEST
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I definitely know the feeling but I needed to move back to Newfoundland and my friends underrstood that if I remained in Cold Lake, i would die emotionally. But i definitely know the feeling...
Great job! |
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Re: Falling Out
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by sensible_paper on
Tuesday, 6th November 2007 @ 03:53:10 AM AEST
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I know how you feel, I have moved like 20 times in my life and I have had to make new friends with each move. At least I have friends where ever I go . It gets easier as you go and you become stronger with time it happens
good luck..
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