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Starbuck
Contributed by
ek_da_poet
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Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 12:48:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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When we met
at starbuck
holding that cappucino cup
a girls figure
with long hair
dark tanned
wearing a red skirt
as i entered on a hot windy afternoon
the air blew me to you
when i said hey
you giggled and blushed
the next thing we know
I'm at the ramada inn
we talked for hours
like we knew each other
as best friends sat
and shared plenty of stories
now we got comfortable
you wanted to slip into
something refreshing
the walk to the bathroom
door open and unlocked
i took a little peek
eyes wide
when i saw you standing
while you peed
it got me guessing
with a wierd feeling
an awkward face
i had to ask
are you a male or female
then ran out and left
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Re: Starbuck
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by faiton on
Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 05:02:28 PM AEST
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| like it a lot, really good, I might have left the last verse out to leave it on a punch but that's just me. good work though. |
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Re: Starbuck
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by PGreene on
Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 08:13:01 PM AEST
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| umm interesting...last verse made me laugh but i dont think it had the same flow as the rest of it |
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Re: Starbuck
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by ravendominique on
Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 09:26:24 PM AEST
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| Humor is the best medicine. good write |
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