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Shadows Of My Mind
Contributed by
maryetta
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Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 10:12:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Shadows cling to my mind of times gone past
days that could have been happy but never to be
of dreams and hopes that somehow became shadows
never to be a reality only of has beens
shadows of my mind becomes dreams of days past
ideas that somehow slip through your fingers
of what should have been but never were
missed chances that cant be recalled or altered
people who should be important somehow fade away
shadows of my mind becomes dreams of days past
and the mind stays in the foggy mist of neverland
where you have no control over your own fate
just a shadow of my mind forever lost to me
i flounder around helplessly just to find who i am
shadows of my mind becomes dreams of days past
there is no clarity to this world i live in anymore
most find it unsettling to be around me
they have no answers so they walk away
leaving me to find my own way groping all the way
shadows of my mind becomes dreams of days past
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maryetta
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2006-04-20 22:12:22]
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Re: Shadows Of My Mind
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by emystar on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 11:36:43 PM AEST
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Hello my friend,
Good work. I wrote a poem years back with the same title but ofcourse the writing is different.
luv, huggs,
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Re: Shadows Of My Mind
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by FRANCO on
Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 09:35:44 PM AEST
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It is a poignant poem, and you have done justice to it .specially the couple of lines;
"people who should be important somehow fade away shadows of my mind becomes dreams of days past"
that reflects the mood of the poet very clearly.
Good work friend.
FRANCO
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