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Drugs
Contributed by
Lilly-Quill
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Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 09:40:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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It started once in chocolate,
It ended up in coke,
It found its way in music pangs,
Like vipers deadly fangs…
This poison spread like fire,
Throughout each state and home,
Now that it’s an epidemic,
To legalize they’re prone.
It started in candy,
Then ended-up in schools;
It spread when they thought the Bible...
"Was not-a-good Golden-rule...!”
It started in the homes,
When kids had nowhere to play;
It took its toll and boomeranged-,
Back on our heads to stay…!
Now it’s in our churches,
For each old aged-gran;
‘Cause Steroids aren’t just for boxers,
It’s for everyone across the land.
It seems the government has the market,
For every cause and lure;
Oh yea, drugs are really big business,
Or they would have found a cure!
Copyright ©
Lilly-Quill
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2006-04-20 21:40:25]
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Re: Drugs
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by redtears on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 09:48:53 PM AEST
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| very intresting i must say! i really liked it! |
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Re: Drugs
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by FRANCO on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 10:06:03 PM AEST
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It is indeed very true, and those last two lines are the key to this entire poem, and reflects the ugly face of the corrupt system that we live in.
This poem and its content should not be just read and forgotten but please give a close thought to it. Good poem…
FRANCO
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Re: Drugs
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by shelby on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 11:41:27 PM AEST
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Amen to this! Your right, a delighfully penned poem on a touchy situation and a very real one. It used to be that the drugs to only worry about were the street drugs, now its everything and everyone is not safe from them.
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Re: Drugs
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 01:33:07 AM AEST
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~*Milly*~
You go girl, this is a very open and honest write. Drugs they're everywhere now. The saddest thing is when they get into the wrong hands. Many innocent lives have been lost and will continue to be lost.
Thank you for sharing this eye opener of a write. Penned brilliantly as always. Well done ~*Milly*~
*big warm huggers from ur fan/friend*
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: Drugs
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by big_B on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 03:52:30 PM AEST
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i liked it very nice read
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