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Our own apocolypse
Contributed by
drtylilsecret
on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 06:55:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Fill a bathtub with your tears,
Just so I can bathe in it all
Drown me in your too-deep sorrow
Hand-in-hand we both will fall
Walk across the edge too close,
It's too late to be afraid, you know?
We've gone through this so many times,
You and me, so long ago
Lets test the limits, cross the lines,
How far the drop, how deep sink?
Lets combine our fears and demons,
And mix it all in one smooth drink
I'll drink your blood, you dry my tears,
We'll stand outside in the full moon,
We'll remember pain and sorrow,
And pretend that we're immune
You get the guns, I'll store the bullets
The note together we will write,
Drop to hell where we're meant to be,
This never really was our fight
"I love red, don't you?" I say,
Bitter laughter at all the blood,
Life was never right for us,
And so we drown in a cherry flood
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Re: Our own apocolypse
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by Aquarius01 on
Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 05:04:31 AM AEST
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| Well written, but much sadness is felt here. I love the flow. It's really sad with one feels this is the only way out...Aquarius01 |
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Re: Our own apocolypse
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 10:04:38 AM AEST
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i like it...the pain, the slight darkness to it. pain is easiest to write about in my opinion...
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Re: Our own apocolypse
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by SmileSkinDeep on
Tuesday, 2nd May 2006 @ 10:31:26 PM AEST
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Disturbingly beautiful, just the way I like it :) No, as it seems, life and love never wanted me; nor did it want the few others that are waiting for me in Hell. Lets just wait till the end of our lifespan to meet them there, eh? We are worth the wait.
Always and never your walking contradiction,
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