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Dont Die On Me
Contributed by
Chanti
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Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Dont die on me, I love you,
I just cant let you go,
If you leave me, I am nothing,
My feelings for you, youll never know,
I pray to God each night
but what difference does it make,
Id give you all my life,
If that is what it takes,
But here, i feel so helpless,
theres nothing i can do,
Theres nothing that i want,
Except to be with you,
But soon you wont exist,
That thought seems so unreal,
I wish that i could tell you,
all of the things i feel,
I love you doesnt sound right,
because i know theres so much more,
I guess i should have told you,
so many times before,
but now, now you are dying,
Just know, your all that i will ever love,
and even when your gone,
Youll be the only thing i think of.
Copyright ©
Chanti
... [
2003-02-03 00:00:00]
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Re: Dont Die On Me
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by Suzy on
Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 01:05:06 AM AEST
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What a sad poem....I'd say definitely tell them how you feel before they are gone because in life there really are no second chances. Don't let yourself regret the things you should have said and done. Thanks for sharing this.
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Re: Dont Die On Me
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by wyrd_faerie on
Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 03:00:12 PM AEST
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| this is beautiful...i love it....although i suppose it's different, this is how i feel about my best friend...i love this... |
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Re: Dont Die On Me
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 03:10:00 AM AEST
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Chanti life is full of mistakes and regrets there are so many things I wish I could change, but I can't I dont know why I just said that, but try not to be so hard on yourself. I loved this poem. Keep on writing. This was all great.
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