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Potential
Contributed by
brooken_22
on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 05:54:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Potential
My
Future
Is waiting
Behind a door
Closed until later
When I have enough time
To open it and allow
It to be released and take shape.
I have so many ideas for
My successful life-solely earned by me.
My daydreams show of endless liberty
They have no idea about me.
What lies ahead for me is not
Known by any person but
Myself. They are clueless
To my plans. Even
My friends don’t know.
Hidden well,
I don’t
Spill.
Copyright ©
brooken_22
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2006-04-20 17:54:09]
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Re: Potential
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by ek_da_poet on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 07:38:07 PM AEST
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| hey how u doin.. i liked your poem i kno where your coming from its real true, and welcome to your-poetry.com keep on posting byez |
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Re: Potential
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 11:12:31 AM AEST
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BRAVO! for you Brooken22. Such a wonderful outlook you have, with humility too!
This is a well thought out poem, and it shows, I hope all your dreams and wishes come true for you.
I'm 69 years old Brooken, and I've dreamed big things in all those years........mine all came true............remember you are a dead man if you can no longer dream!
Warm love
LovingCritters
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