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untouchable

Contributed by BSteel on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 01:13:25 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Brothers and sisters let us not forget the American Dream,
whatever happened to honor and dignity,
of those holding property,
it is our responsiblity to justify why things must be,
but instead partying i.e. natural corruption before getting things done,
has left us with poor education, educated by stupid hipppies who thought communism would save them,
demcocracy and the market are God driven, no one can but God can control transactions,
God is the great oraganizer of economics its time we accept that,
democracy is something inherant with reason,
family is the only justified bond to enter society,
as such we all must respect the path of our ancestors regardless of society,
all families have a destiny,
and that is to accumulate the most liberty for them and their ancestry,
and desecnedants,
laws should bend around and do such,
all should have an equal say in creating history,
for between it all free will finds a way,
if Americans could only shake their ignorance,
i see through ingrained predjucies,
the new generations are so brainwashed they scare me,
reform is needed to not get me wrong,
all problems I feel I can just solve,
with things such as words
such is such my work it feels
will never be done, until I feel I have won,
the hearts of this nation, and secured placement
formal arrangement for my descendants,
no mercy for those that ignore this manifesto,
i have two options,
I could sell out to Hollywood like my former idols,
and be a ***** the rest of my life like 50 cent or Eminnem,
or I can start my own thing on my own conditions,
hot off the presses the hunger is gone from most of these so called rappers,
or I could give back to my community like Carnigie or Rockefellar,
still I will never find serenity,
I bear too heavy a load, one man can't save the entire western civilization,
I can only do as God wills, I only feel because it is God's will,
my character is everchanging and volatile,
but at at the heart of me,
I'm the hardest H'ville hustler,
waiting for God to live out the creed,
that in fact he is benovelent, till then try me i'm so dirty i'm untouchable.

Copyright © BSteel ... [ 2006-04-20 13:13:25]
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Re: untouchable (User Rating: 1 )
by PGreene on Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 08:21:39 PM AEST
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i really like ur style on this one. what u said was moving. never sell out man

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