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Emotional Breakthrough

Contributed by poetic_influence on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 11:38:51 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

I guess you would call it wrong
For me to wanna leave
But much like an unfinished song
The end...is all that I need
Now I'm sorry if you take this hard
And it breaks you like a boulder
But its time we finish what we start
And give this rusted love the cold shoulder
I'm far too deep in this
For you to ever pull me out
Please let go of my wrist
And there is no need to shout
That wont change a thing
It wont make it better
So here....take your ring
And all of your love letters
I'd rather not remember the past
Even though I should
Those memories do not need to last
Honestly...I dont think they could
For I am already forgetting
Yes...I am already changing
Soon you will blame this all on me...I am betting
And how I left you cuz you made minimum wage an......
Well you already know that isn't true
But I already know the lines that you'll say
But regardless...I am leaving you boo
And as heartless as you may be...for you...I will pray

Copyright © poetic_influence ... [ 2006-04-20 11:38:51]
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Re: Emotional Breakthrough (User Rating: 1 )
by katt on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 05:13:54 PM AEST
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Words from the heart, love it. Good visual language. Great rhyme and flow. Very good job and I enjoyed reading it.

katt

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