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Carry On With Life
Contributed by
SmileSkinDeep
on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 09:33:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Pull your chin up
Wipe the tears from your eyes
Although it may
Come as a suprise
Things will eventually
Seem better
Keep this feeling perpetually
It will get easier
Seein as people
Are my only problem
Avoid the mutual hate
Not avoid THEM
Tried to tell them
To burn in Hell
I was sadly cut off
(saved by the bell)
They must get over
Who I am:
Not her
Not consededly two-faced
I'll carry on with life
Although it may
Come as a suprise
I will keep my chin up
Wipe the tears from my eyes
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SmileSkinDeep
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2006-04-19 21:33:54]
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Re: Carry On With Life
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by Aspiring on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 09:39:33 PM AEST
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This is a great poem, probably the best i have read so far on this subject
Keep up the good work!
-Aspiring
p.s. I don't know if you read my poem "freedom of the forgotten", but if you ever do, please comment on it! i would love to hear what you have to say...
thanks
and i loved ur poem |
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Re: Carry On With Life
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by Sena on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 10:04:49 PM AEST
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| very nice...I enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: Carry On With Life
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by drtylilsecret on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 12:32:25 AM AEST
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oh wow april, great write, and i'm sure all those who read it know what you're saying is true, they just......don't have the strength to get over it suppose. "i'm not stupid i just lack common sense" lol. but yes, as always, great insight from you. fantastic job.
~natalya |
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