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Lost in yours eyes
Contributed by
whatsername
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Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 05:38:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Lost in your eyes
Found in your kiss
In need of your touch
The warmth that I miss
Touching your smile
Caressing your skin
Pulled in so close
That I can smell our sin
Black nights end in day
Stars shine to bright
The moon in your eyes
Is the only heavenly light
Without your voice
In loss of your breath
If I never had you
I would welcome death
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Re: Lost in yours eyes
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by aegurly on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 05:57:43 PM AEST
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great poem i loved it hey read mine and comment sumtime ok
aegurly!! |
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Re: Lost in yours eyes
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 06:02:00 PM AEST
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I somehow remember, since I haven't kissed, I don't know.
But your poem makes me remind the First Time in love.
:D Nice Write |
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Re: Lost in yours eyes
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by candysears on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 06:03:26 PM AEST
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Very nice write...Brilliant work
God Bless! |
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Re: Lost in yours eyes
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by guiltycircles on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 06:09:51 PM AEST
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| this is beautiful, you have really described the feeling of being in love, completely imersed in the presence of another |
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Re: Lost in yours eyes
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by DraconianFetus on
Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 10:07:18 AM AEST
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| thanks for the comment, So i decided to post one for you. I really like this poem, I know exactly how you feel. |
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