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Promise

Contributed by Michael_Bevins on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 03:46:59 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



We promised today we'd do it no more
Hurting yourself is now what I abhor
Feelings of love stream through my heart

My soul fills with lust
While my skin turns to dust
Even on my deathbed
I will love you all the same
And with that I will never be ashamed

Why can't you see all the good in you?
Why must you hate yourself?
Put that knife back on the shelf
Baby we can get through this together

You and I we make a great team
I know sometimes you just want to scream
I have my faults but so do you
So let's just put them aside and start anew

We know our love is O so true
So what is this we're going through?
We can make it, it's just a little further

We must set our goal and stick to it
Baby I just know we can get through it
Feelings of hurt and pain aside
Please don't let them run your life

I know you promised you wouldn't do it again
But baby I know how hard it is to stop
Once you begin
I trust you to the fullest

I love you now i'll love you forever
Life and death i'll be here for you
Waiting and praying for you to be near
Longing for the day when we can live happily
Once and for all.




Copyright © Michael_Bevins ... [ 2006-04-19 15:46:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by aegurly on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 06:08:00 PM AEST
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i really liked it!!!


aegurly!!!


Re: Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 06:51:18 PM AEST
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~*Michael*~
It sounds like ur girl has some personal issues. Stick by her and she shall overcome whatevers keeping her down. All the best to u both.
A very well penned piece of poetry. Well done.
*warm huggers*
~*suzie Q*~


Re: Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by oreo910 on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 10:29:17 PM AEST
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I guess the topics good but come on plz I've read better poems of yours! I still loved as usual but come on Mike! U have done way better! But keep going try harder next time with the rhyming thing okay! -l8ter, Arianna


Re: Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 09:59:30 AM AEST
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This is just like the poem you wrote "Stay awhile" it says the same types of things and has the same pattern of speech. While it is good I can only give 4 stars for a repeat as I would expect to get if I used the same lines in a poem. What i am looking for is inspiration. Make the person who reads your poem want to change their life or wish you were speaking to them. If you can do that you will go along way on this site. The first person to make believe is you. What do you want someone to say to you? What do you want to say from the depth of your soul that you would not want to say to anyone else but this person you love. Find the words that say it. Then write it ! Keep working at it and you will do well.




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