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MY BEWAILING HEART
Contributed by
FRANCO
on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 08:21:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Like a desert-blessed shower she sprinkled into
my arid life, those vibrant shades of bubbly desires,
flaunted tender blossoms of perpetual love,
hope and joy on my parched path.
Sweet nectar was her love - dwell in my heart
not just today but shall, till eternity and thereafter – time
perhaps get weary and cease to tick, but prevails
my love for thee forever beyond life.
Wonder what thou thought so, to abandon me in
the middle of nowhere; snatching away my beaming heart,
one proud possession all that I had- left me bare without love,
deep in a gloomy forlorn tunnel with no gleam ahead.
I shall drink those treasured time of love with thee - to linger, till my mortal flesh to cease,
to merge with thy soul; from there be no power to separate me from thee..
(FRANCO)
Copyright ©
FRANCO
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2006-04-19 08:21:13]
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Re: MY BEWAILING HEART
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 10:26:29 AM AEST
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Well done, Franco.... great use of metaphors.
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Re: MY BEWAILING HEART
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 10:34:31 AM AEST
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a most enchanting write...very nice indeed.
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Re: MY BEWAILING HEART
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 11:42:39 AM AEST
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Superb write Mr. Franco. One hell of a write in fact, searing with a descriptive talent that makes me crave more.
Keep Writing!
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Re: MY BEWAILING HEART
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by wbluerose02 on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 11:44:14 AM AEST
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| Great write here very well written I like the way you worded this write I hope to read more from you and thank you for sharing this with my family and I. |
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Re: MY BEWAILING HEART
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 01:29:36 PM AEST
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Bravo!!!!!!!
Well done, I was moved by your words and beautiful passionate portrayal of your feelings , Just wonderful,
LG who is giving this a five |
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