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A Cool Ride
Contributed by
donkey
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Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 08:08:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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A Cool Ride
On A Big Bike
Early Morning
Early Spring
Gravel Road
Muddy Tires
Deep Ruts
Dirty Face
Stocking Cap
Leather Mittens
Freedom Rider?
No
40 mpg
30 mph
quiet pipes
quietude
Deer, Rabbit, Skunk
Black field
River bottom
oak trees
A Cool Ride
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donkey
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2006-04-19 08:08:48]
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Re: A Cool Ride
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 10:27:10 AM AEST
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nice write..good imagery.
the lack of extra words in this write makes your "cool ride" stand out...i like it a lot.
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Re: A Cool Ride
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 07:59:47 PM AEST
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Holding back from being ultra poetic as you have done so well here, shows a strength. This poem laced up with fancy lettering would have lost it's feel. As it is this is one of the best and most simple poems I have read in some time. It makes me want to crank up my bike and head for a lake somewhere near the mountains. I am now craving my own, cool ride!
Great Job!
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