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Spell
Contributed by
sed
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Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 08:22:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
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im caught up in your spell
youve done it all too well
theres nothing left to do
but sit and wait for you
the spell you cast
will forever last
deep inside my soul
where there once lay a hole
i long for the day to come
when you and i are one
until then i wait in pain
yet im the only one to blame
here i sit and wait for you
as if you longed for me too
like we were once together
oh how ill dream of that forever
and a dream is all that it can be
because you never seem to notice me
still your spell will forever stay
even if you go your seperate way
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2006-04-18 20:22:40]
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Re: Spell
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by jada on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 11:08:24 PM AEST
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hhow magical lol no really it was a really great poem. great work!!!
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Re: Spell
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 11:39:50 PM AEST
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I loved the way this came together. Hopefully her spell will be broken and instead of draming of her she will be near your side.
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Re: Spell
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 05:17:07 AM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: Spell
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by katt on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 09:56:02 AM AEST
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Good rhyme and and rhythm. Heartfelt emotion. Enjoyed it!
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Re: Spell
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 11:51:21 AM AEST
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Heart breaking my dear friend. You have a well displayed knack for writing. I can not tell you how happy I am to see you posting on another poetry site, one that I adore. For as it is, every time I see your name my heart begins to pace. I know you will strike a chord with your words. You have done it too many times. You are by the very definition a True Poet!
God Bless You Milly!
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Re: Spell
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by aniT on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 10:41:32 PM AEST
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| Nice poem and I kno how u feel...exactly. |
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Re: Spell
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by Caged Soul on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 05:48:40 AM AEST
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hehehe I relate to this a bit too much hey!
This was very nice, I love the simplicity.
In some places the rhyming seems a bit forced, but it's not anything major ;-)
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