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Reminiscence
Contributed by
Steel
on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 04:35:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Would that I should know you again,
in the places that we frolicked,
without the world’s cares,
as blithe children,
that were,
that may be again,
through the tides,
from the origin,
from the pensive,
from the joy,
in the motions of sheltered visionaries –
reborn in love’s posterity – our breathing, streaming, vicarious lineage.
Copyright ©
Steel
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2006-04-18 16:35:21]
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Re: Reminiscence
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by luckedout on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 04:45:11 PM AEST
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| You worded it really well, great title great ending. |
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Re: Reminiscence
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by edwynne on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 09:59:43 AM AEST
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| again..some real nice lines... but that nonsensical first line kind of ruins it for me..thats just my opinion.. I do like like your stuff tho :} |
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Re: Reminiscence
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by Lilly-Quill on
Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 07:58:47 PM AEST
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Unique is this train of thought, poetically ascribed~!
~Lilly-Quill
Though “Half the vices which the world condemns most loudly have seeds of good in them and require moderate use rather than total abstinence,” as Samuel Butler once said.” The writing of the wise are the only riches our posterity cannot squander, Walter Savage Landor wrote. |
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Re: Reminiscence
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by Steel on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 12:58:59 PM AEST
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the last line refers to my children
-Steel |
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