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am i supposed to accept my defeat? i don't know. i know i don't want to...

Contributed by ibelieve-dreamsonhorizon on Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 03:19:54 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

empty as a vessel in a corner, can't see,
longing for a ray of light to shine in my mind
that's all. that's all i ever wanted.
is this too much to ask? i don't think so.
but then why?
why does the light give away to the darkness?
is the power of hope not powerful enough?
i don't think so.
i still believe in what every living man believes even in my most desperate moods
but why? then why can't this hope fall down on me?
can anyone answer me?
or am i crying out in vain?
no i don't think so.
i don't want to give up the only thing i have right now:
hope
maybe it's the most powerful thing that ever existed in my world,
yes, i think so...
what about you?

Copyright © ibelieve-dreamsonhorizon ... [ 2006-04-18 15:19:54]
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Re: am i supposed to accept my defeat? i don't know. i know i don't want to... (User Rating: 1 )
by trini on Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 04:34:31 PM AEST
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Hope, mental drive, and a blindless desire, can all be the strongest power in the human body when used correctly.
No matter how hopeless it may seem
You will eventually turn the corner and find the sun shining.
Even in the darkest times when hope is elusive, in the distance though it may see unreachable the light is at your fingertips.
All you need to do is snap your fingers.
Keep up the good work
-Trini

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