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The Woman Opposite
Contributed by
faiton
on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 01:54:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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The woman across the street
Sometimes,
Sometimes leaves her bedroom curtains open.
And when I clean my teeth
In my bathroom opposite
Sometimes,
Sometimes, I see her in her pyjamas or bra.
And once,
Oh once, I saw her bum.
And now,
Now, I have the cleanest teeth in my street,
And sometimes,
Sometimes the sun reflects off them.
And once,
Oh once the sun shone off them and into her room.
And now,
Oh now she shuts her curtains.
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Re: The Woman Opposite
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 06:49:45 AM AEST
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you have such a lateral out there way of thinking!
The style here reminds me of the Liverpool poets, Brian Patten, Roger Mcgough etc.
You are definitely pushing the boundaries with your work and making people think.
Great work.
J. |
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Re: The Woman Opposite
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by Spike on
Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 05:52:29 AM AEST
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And Mervyn Peake, yes definitely a fan of MP or soaked in a broth of his subconscious. I have done this too, but without my glasses it was all a fantastic, memorable blur.
Spike |
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Re: The Woman Opposite
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by vitamin_joe on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 07:57:12 AM AEST
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| that's funny. I like the twist at the end as well. |
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