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Sick From Love (Song of Solomon 2:5)
Contributed by
Lilly-Quill
on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 01:08:17 AM in AEST
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Two soul paths destined through the night
Perhaps not situated, for the time, just right
I leave you, my love, at the foot of the cross
‘Tis the hardest thing I do, with sense of loss
Between these net-pages His hand has come
A glitch in the system or an appointment not won
Disheartened but lifted, I’m sheltered in God
Love, do not call me; for I’m sick of love’s sod
Callous friends, of the friendless, keep far away
If victory means aloneness then alone I shall stay
Don’t falter, don’t waver, don’t come near my door
Wisdom she holds me, and I need nothing more
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Lilly-Quill
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2006-04-18 01:08:17]
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Re: Sick From Love (Song of Solomon 2:5)
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 05:25:18 AM AEST
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| Very good , I always enjoy reading your poetry, there is always a message within. |
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Re: Sick From Love (Song of Solomon 2:5)
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by katt on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 06:10:20 AM AEST
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Beautifully written. I enjoyed reading your poem. A message from the heart of pain and sadness of love. Great job!
katt
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Re: Sick From Love (Song of Solomon 2:5)
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 11:46:07 AM AEST
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Very nice meter and rhyme... this is a good poem, inspired by one of my favorite Books too. After Ecclesiastes, of course...
Take care.
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Re: Sick From Love (Song of Solomon 2:5)
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by EmptyGirl on
Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 01:48:16 AM AEST
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| Wow, this is beautiful. A very good friend of mine told me you were a very talented poet, and I see they have not lied. I love this. Song of Solomon is my favorite book, and you have reminded me why. Thanks :) |
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