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A beer for a tear
Contributed by
lonelywolf04
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Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 01:06:39 AM in AEST
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The one that drinks his pain away,
Only to remember it the next day,
Crys without ever sheding a tear,
Happends every year,
Says one more beer,
Instead of a tear,
Wants to start over,
And be sober,
Sober becomes drunk going 90 down main,
Driving insane,
Kids play on these streets playground now a grave just one more beer,
Intsead of a tear.
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lonelywolf04
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2006-04-18 01:06:39]
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Re: A beer for a tear
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by katt on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 06:19:02 AM AEST
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Very powerful and moving poem. Got my attention. Good job
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Re: A beer for a tear
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by sprinter27 on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 11:07:06 AM AEST
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wow... that was a very powerful write and i enjoyed reading it... but it's really sad. how people want to do something, but it's too hard. if you're writing this from personal experience, i hope everything turns out great for you!!! keep up the great writing!
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Re: A beer for a tear
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 12:28:41 PM AEST
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wow very good write.. I really liked this .. it was short but yet soo sad and its true about alot of people out there.. instead of letting themselves feel they drink it away and end up hurting someone.. awesome write.. this is a very powerful peace thanks for sharing
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