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Like it or not
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
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Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 12:35:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I'm filling these pages as fast as I can
So I can give you the book that you'll understand
The pens that I've emptied
With the work of my hand
To show you how I feel
To show you what can be
If given the chance
From start to finish
It's brutal honesty
Like it or not
I just hope you feel something
Even if it's not what I feel
Will you read it again?
Words of complicated love that I've had at one time or another for you
When you're done
Return it back to me
If you felt it too
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the_story_of_the_year
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2006-04-18 00:35:43]
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Re: Like it or not
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by twick on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 12:56:06 AM AEST
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so sad and sweet,
with a dash of "heart on your sleeve"
I relate. |
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Re: Like it or not
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by sadaddy on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 01:11:35 AM AEST
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| Very nice, it has a rhythm to it. |
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Re: Like it or not
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by Drapes on
Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 08:08:09 PM AEST
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Oooh, I really like it!
Great job!
-Drapes |
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