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Shades of Blue
Contributed by
Channing
on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 11:40:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The sun the sand and the sea
With the sad shades of blue
Would never have had to be
If it weren’t for you
We stood together in the sand
Looking the beauty of the world in the face
I thought nothing could be more grand
Oh, how you’ve ruined this place
I remember so long ago
It was breathtaking to think of you
Never did we grow
Only the sad shades of blue
I would ask you not to leave
To stay for another chance
For I wish not to grieve
Nor to play the heartbreak dance
You said you didn’t need me
And there was nothing I could do
So I sit at the emotional sea
Left alone with the sad shades of blue
-Channing-
Copyright ©
Channing
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2006-04-17 23:40:51]
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Re: Shades of Blue
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by katt on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 06:25:05 AM AEST
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pain and sadness and loss of love. We can never change another person and make them the way we want them to be. We just have to let them go. Great job!
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Re: Shades of Blue
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 12:30:23 PM AEST
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its hard to lose someone you love.. this was a very expressive and creative way to write about it.. i enjoyed reading this.. yet soo sad.. thanks for sharing awesome write
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