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Censorship For The Damned (and by them)
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abnormalpunk
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Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 09:23:07 PM in AEST
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Re: Censorship For The Damned (and by them)
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 09:37:26 PM AEST
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| maybe if you did a little research into the posts that have been edited by moderators youd be surprised....youd be surprised by whats not edited. this poem makes it seem like moderators moderate every single thing they dont agree with, when in all actuality they let a lot of things slide that they dont like personally because its not against the site rules. if you have a problem with the moderators then by all means make your own poetry site or whatnot. go to another site, perhaps with moderators that arent as strict. as for how your poem is written. cheesy rhymes and needs some work on being a bit more concise with meanings. i dont really know what the tone in this is supposed to be, seems ambivalent if anything. needs some work with grammar. your last line seems a bit too long to fit in with your other lines. this seems like a 5 minute write that was written when in a ticked off mood, and not worth the posting. it shows nothing for your side of why your post shouldnt have been edited, which i think could have brought more to this poem. otherwise what is the point of ranting about something without even telling the reason? a person can say i hate this and that all day long, but no one cares unless theres a reason for it....and if the reason is bad those listening just think the person is a fool. you cant hate someone for doing their job, and you breaking the rules. |
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Re: Censorship For The Damned (and by them)
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by PoeticLicense on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 02:07:04 AM AEST
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Hm, interesting how it doesn't occur to you to thank the people for allowing you to post poetry up here at all.
if you want to be able to say whatever you want, find a way to be heard by yourself instead of using someone else's soapbox.
And that title is really corny. Think about it. |
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