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Painful Love
Contributed by
sed
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Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 04:39:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Watching you from across the room
sends searing pain through my heart.
I think back to a year ago,
when I thought we'd never part.
My love for you just won't die down -
it just grows with each new day.
I wish you'd dare to look at me
and hear what I have to say;
"I love you and I want you back - "
but these words you just won't hear.
You don't seem to remember them -
all the memories I hold dear.
You were my first kiss, my first love
and now you don't even care.
How could you just blow it away?
We were the perfect pair.
you seem content to let me go -
You're doing fine as you are,
while I'm still missing how we were.
We had the best love by far.
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2006-04-17 16:39:03]
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Re: Painful Love
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by Whatsername on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 05:22:50 PM AEST
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| Great poem. You worded it so emotionaly to where the reader understands perfectly how you feel. Great job! |
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Re: Painful Love
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by Archie on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 05:52:44 PM AEST
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I like the simplicity in this. This poem reminded me of a song;
"You're running in the wrong direction
You're running from true love and affection
I'm taking life seriously for you it's just a thrill
If Mother Nature don't stop you Father Time surely will"
Quote from the song "Father Time" by Brooke Benton |
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Re: Painful Love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 06:26:02 PM AEST
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| Very emotional. I think everybody can relate to this. I know i can. Excellent write |
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Re: Painful Love
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 12:37:05 PM AEST
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wow this is a very powerful write on emotions and i can relate to this.. i know the feeling.. this is well expressed and i love the flow of it..
I hope they return to you
JENNI |
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