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Prison
Contributed by
addie
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Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 08:03:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The old,shaggy man
With folds of skin covering his face
Wakes up in the morning
With a ray of light
entering his cell
entering once again in his life
It's a bright new day
he thinks of his wife & children
he smiles thinking of them
And that someday he too would play
But! Alas these are just thoughts
He is bound by the thick dirty wall
he is a loner in his cell
and is nearing his death knell
being merry are things long forgotten
cause he committed a sin once
and he is here since then.....
Copyright ©
addie
... [
2002-07-27 08:03:11]
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Re: Prison
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by zer0 on
Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 12:32:07 PM AEST
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truly tragic. everyone does wrong, everyone breaks the law. some people are caught at the wrong times, some people are made examples of. very sad, a harsh reality for many.
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Re: Prison
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by Chrissie on
Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 05:39:26 PM AEST
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Such a sad poem Addie and very touching. Welcome to YPDC...I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems.
Chrissie
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Re: Prison
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 08:06:02 AM AEST
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Wow! Great poem. So sad and tragic but very well written.
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