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A Scenic Vortex Between Taste, Smell, and Cardboard Wine Glasses
Contributed by
Steel
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Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 04:19:56 PM in AEST
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wearisome worms dine on the
living in the city can be an exasperating rat
race headlong to the drab horizonless finish
line your pockets with nebulous
directions can be vague from extinct family trees
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Steel
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2006-04-17 16:19:56]
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Re: A Scenic Vortex Between Taste, Smell, and Cardboard Wine Glasses
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by shelby on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 10:16:37 PM AEST
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I sense something very personal in this write.
The end sealed this, extinct family tree's oh yes!
Michelle |
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Re: A Scenic Vortex Between Taste, Smell, and Cardboard Wine Glasses
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by edwynne on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 09:52:56 AM AEST
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| i really like this.. the obscurity is really good.. you just need to sort the structure out so it reads better..other than that..its sweeet :} |
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