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darkness
Contributed by
halli
on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 03:13:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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its so dark
there is nothing there
you can feel the evil
surrounding you
You scream
and no one comes
You cry yet you know
no one cares
You scarmble around to find the light
Its gone its nowhere everyone is right
You lost your a gonner
the evil now is getting closer
You try and think
but no ideas come
You huddle in the corner
waiting for it to eat you
All the sudden
a light appears
its so bright
You close ur eyes
when your eyes adjust
everything is light
your fears have left
and your hope returned
The evil has fled
yet no one is around
where did it go
why had it fled
everything remains a mystery
but you felt a burdon lift
the evil had left
the darkness was there no longer.
Copyright ©
halli
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2006-04-17 15:13:10]
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Re: darkness
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by brew on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 03:31:23 PM AEST
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Loved it...It seems a burden of emptiness has been lifted from your self.! I bet I know what that would be..lol....Keep writing, you are good.! Yes, that come from the inside.!
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Re: darkness
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by Whatsername on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 04:41:58 PM AEST
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| Awesome!! I loved it. The way you write is so expressive and very emotional. Great job!!!! |
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Re: darkness
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by Packatack on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 02:04:43 AM AEST
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I like this poem...thanks for sharing
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