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What have I done
Contributed by
Kevin
on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 03:05:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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What Have I Done?
Alone I sit, thoughts in my mind
Staring into space
Thinking of your face
And how you’ve been so unkind
Thinking of life only as an illusion
Nothing is real
No pain I feel
Drowning in my confusion
I sit in my desolation
Consumed by all this frustration
Regretting this obligation
Having a revelation
Of my life
Breaking my concentration
For your fascination
Feeling the domination
Of your vindication
To me
Pondering the question related to my lifelong fate…
When did I become the type of man that a woman learns to hate?
Ripping myself from this isolation
Running from the conflagration
Sick of this desperation
Recognizing the indication
I flee
Realizing my aspiration
Checking my calculation
Gaining my liberation
Done with my aggravation
I am free
Free from the bonds you hold me by
Free from you
Nothing to do
But to spread my wings and fly
Life is good, I am well
To you I say
Good day
I’ll see you in hell
Copyright ©
Kevin
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Re: What have I done
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by katt on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 03:10:34 PM AEST
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| Very good poem about the pain of love lost. I know the feeling and you expressed it so very well! Great job! |
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Re: What have I done
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by marie on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 05:49:12 PM AEST
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| wonderful poem, i loved it |
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Re: What have I done
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by Lilbabe on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 06:24:50 PM AEST
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great poem, i loved the way it rhymed. it is very unique, keep up the good work.
~lexy~ |
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Re: What have I done
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by sprinter27 on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 11:32:59 AM AEST
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wow... that was a great poem, and i truly mean it. i loved the feeling and vibration i got from your words, they were well picked. excellent job. and i'm sorry that you were hurt by someone, but at least you're moving on... and that last line really threw me. see you in hell? you're planning on going to hell? lol. nvr mind. not my business. but, excellent write, i really like it, keep up the great work!
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Re: What have I done
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by wizard on
Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 07:42:55 PM AEST
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very nice...i especially like the varying format of the stanzas.
btw, thats my kind of happy ending!
wiz |
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