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A STROLL IN THE GARDEN
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FRANCO
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Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 10:40:21 AM in AEST
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I walked proudly with thee, in the Garden of
Eden, no hunger or thirst, but joy at
every bend - beyond time and end,
cool was the breeze, carried fresh bouquet sent.
far beyond the fence I saw frustration
chaos, pain ‘nd panic, tousled with mortal end.
Waited passionately to devour me from soul
to snatch away from thee.
(FRANCO)
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FRANCO
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2006-04-17 10:40:21]
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Re: A STROLL IN THE GARDEN
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by sillysal on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 11:41:37 AM AEST
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Heartfelt longing is obvious in this short poem. I'm not sure that this is a garden of love but sort of like Eden, where the end of the walk was disappointing.
Keep in touch and take care, friend.
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Re: A STROLL IN THE GARDEN
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 10:30:13 AM AEST
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nice write..percect choice of words.
wiz |
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Re: A STROLL IN THE GARDEN
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by candysears on
Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 09:02:27 PM AEST
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Very nice write...
God Bless! |
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