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CHOCOLATE
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 04:22:21 AM in AEST
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I know I said I wouldn't but im afraid I did,
I brought a great big Easter egg, and scoffed it like a kid,
it was such a blissful feeling as it melted in my mouth,
I didn't even care my diet had gone south,
When I ate it all, I began to think,
about the one I brought my son,
in the cupboard by the sink,
No I told myself, dont let your will power falter,
but half an hour later, my mouth began to water,
I went into the kitchen, thought oh what the hell,
grabbed it out the cupboard, and ate his one aswell,
It was a lovely feeling as the chocolate touched my lips,
now i'll have to suffer as it heads towards my hips,
Then my son came home, "mum that chocolate smells real nice",
I said that "yours has gone", "I think we may have mice".
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Re: CHOCOLATE
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by Whatsername on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 09:16:40 AM AEST
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Great poem
I as well had that feeling on easter...i really enjoyed this poem it made me giggle keep up the good work! |
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Re: CHOCOLATE
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by katt on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 11:49:28 AM AEST
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Too funny! I know the feeling cause I have a weakness for chocolate too and trying to keep my weight down. Enjoyed reading your poem. Great rhyme and rhythm.
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Re: CHOCOLATE
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 04:21:04 PM AEST
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that was funny. i could picture my mom doing the same thing and being all creative with her story too.
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Re: CHOCOLATE
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by Manda2 on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 04:12:21 PM AEST
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| Brilliant poem! It made my mouth water reading it! I love chocolate! |
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Re: CHOCOLATE
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by maestar on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 12:13:16 PM AEST
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i pigged out this easter too. great poem.
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Re: CHOCOLATE
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 12:23:04 PM AEST
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What is it about women and chocolate?There is definitely a gender thing going on there.Good fun poem,Lilly,enjoyed reading and I hope that greedy mouse went out and bought the boy another egg!(smiles)
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Re: CHOCOLATE
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by RLWildPassions on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 04:44:28 PM AEST
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lol, cute.. yes, # 1 crave among women, second only to pizza for men lol.. true chocolate, not that fake stuff..brings on that happy aphrodisiacal power... happy for sure... provides energy too. Take a nibble now and then..rL
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