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Feed the wealthy
Contributed by
lady_daisy
on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 11:56:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Time has yet
to come and heal their broken faces.
Feed the wealthy
and spit in the faces of the hungry.
Giving we are
when we throw a dollar at the beggar.
Feel good we do,
until his brothers gather around you.
Allusions we believe
since we are the age of the naïve
we staple our hearts
onto a matter we can’t understand.
So strong
the ignoramus on your television you become.
Let your eyes wander
and have a conscience.
But are you really breathing?
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lady_daisy
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2006-04-16 23:56:30]
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Re: Feed the wealthy
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by FRANCO on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 04:07:34 AM AEST
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If you have given a Dollar to a beggar and felt satisfied, think again friend you have already created a couple of beggar to follow his foot steps.
I sensed a natural flow of words in your poem which I liked the most.
FRANCO
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Re: Feed the wealthy
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by katt on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 01:49:35 PM AEST
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Great poem and good work expressing that part of us that often forgets our fellowman. I have a poem called Homeless Joe that sort of speaks of the same issue. not as good as this poem though. Keep up the good work!
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