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Somber Attainments
Contributed by
night_child
on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 10:27:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Just as the Wolf cries
To a moon too far to reach
Just as the Owl senses
A prey too far to catch
Lost in a catacomb
Of desires not my own
I only wish I could
Pull away
I'd shed no tears
If that wolf
Should rip my throat
Spill my blood
Upon an uncaring ground
If it means returning
To a time long forgotten
When I could look at you
See the epitome of love
I fear that now
All I see is a void
I could chase your love
Down a mountainside of hope
But where would I be then?
Someday
I'll find the way
To reach the moon
To catch my prey
Copyright ©
night_child
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2006-04-16 22:27:01]
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Re: Somber Attainments
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 10:32:34 PM AEST
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BEAUTIFUL
the best poem i have read in awhile.
i can relate to it all.
your words are wonderful.
good job!
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Re: Somber Attainments
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 10:58:10 PM AEST
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Wow... awesome write... I too, can relate, but would never have written this so well..
Thank you
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Re: Somber Attainments
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 11:58:08 PM AEST
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Tremendous, dark, powerful and simply put beautiful! Superb!
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Re: Somber Attainments
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by ButchHoward on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 12:18:02 PM AEST
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Outstanding poem! One of the best I have read too. I love the way you have conveyed the act of searching the heart and mind here through beautiful flowing words.
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Re: Somber Attainments
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by katt on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 03:42:25 PM AEST
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Excellent poetry in motion! Enjoyed it immensely!
Katt |
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Re: Somber Attainments
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 04:01:58 PM AEST
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one of the poems i have liked best so far in reading today. i find it very relatible, and i hope for someday too.
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