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I hate your smile
Contributed by
whatsername
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Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 10:21:21 PM in AEST
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I hate your smile
I hate your face
I hate your voice
And your warm embrace
I hate your body
I hate your hands
I hate your lips
And the way your kiss lands
I hate your warmth
I hate your touch
I hate your sincerity
I hate you so much
I hate you holding me
And how you fit me like a glove
But when I say hate
I truly mean love
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Re: I hate your smile
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 10:27:18 PM AEST
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GREAT poem.
ive felt this way before.
i love the way you've captured your feelings. |
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Re: I hate your smile
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by Michael_Bevins on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 11:33:22 PM AEST
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| Very nice. By first looking at the title i was like "hmmm why is this in the love poems section?" But now that ive read it i see lol. Great write. I enjoyed. Keep it up. |
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Re: I hate your smile
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 11:39:29 PM AEST
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You know for such a simple write, this showed enormous poetic skill and depth. First off to love someone is in a sense to hate someone. Because loving someone is a breaking down of oneself. Also the fact that your last line replaced hate with love, shows the confusion of love and the childish playing of early love. Either way you intended this was a striking work. Most may not share in my sentiments, because it was very simple is wording and flow. I, feel that distracts the reader from the strength which is in the intention. The distraction as well displays a genius. Well Done, I am very impressed with this.
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Re: I hate your smile
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by Dizza_13 on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 03:54:09 AM AEST
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great funky little write. full of energy, loved it,
hated it whats the difference? good stuff
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Re: I hate your smile
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by katt on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 03:52:29 PM AEST
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Reminds me of the movie "When Harry Met Sally." She said she hated him while dying inside with love for him. Makes love that much stronger, I guess. Enjoyed it very much.
Great job!
Katt |
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Re: I hate your smile
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by katt on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 03:52:29 PM AEST
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Reminds me of the movie "When Harry Met Sally." She said she hated him while dying inside with love for him. Makes love that much stronger, I guess. Enjoyed it very much.
Great job!
Katt |
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Re: I hate your smile
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 03:56:20 PM AEST
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well it is a womans purogative to change her mind, right ? and this just goes to show why there is so much confusion between the sexes. ( i was joking !!!! ) this was a fun poem to read and very relatable.
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Re: I hate your smile
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by candysears on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 06:09:07 PM AEST
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| Great write...Keep posting...You have that talent...God Bless! |
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Re: I hate your smile
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by ham323 on
Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 11:41:37 AM AEST
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| Great poem. Love the ending. |
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