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Monster
Contributed by
Michael_Bevins
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Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 08:15:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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What is it that i'm becoming?
This monster that I create
Drives me to the road they call hate
Smiling he stands to deliver
Quivering, I stand alone and shiver
For he is pain, hate and pride
He knows what he's doing and by that I abide
He is the place that I abhor
He is here ill suffer no more
For this monster that i've made
It is me and we are one
Cunning scheme and dreadful nights
We are the one that strikes fear in their hearts
We are the one that feast on their parts
Hateful times
And horrific rhythm's
He is here
Now run away in fear
Hate is not the route I wanted to go
Hate is not a good thing you know
Once he's gone i'm left in fear
Wondering why the hell im even here
From whom they run away
It's that thing that ruins everyone's day
Must be a monster that they see
For that monster dwells in me
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Michael_Bevins
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2006-04-16 20:15:38]
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Re: Monster
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by twick on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 08:20:26 PM AEST
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make sure you check your spelling before posting. Other than that I liked this one in the contextual sense. I thought it kind of fizzled out at the end though by stating the obvious.
I think though you are doing a good job searching for your voice. |
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Re: Monster
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by dedpoet on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 10:54:34 PM AEST
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| That was really good |
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Re: Monster
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by Archie on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 02:35:58 PM AEST
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This is not bad. I think it is good to take a sober view of yourself so long as you don't persecute yourself.
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