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Die please so I can get on with my life!
Contributed by
BrokenXbyManyX
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Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 03:48:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You took me out
Acting like you actually cared
But did you?
Hell no.
You treated me like a naive little girl
You were older than me.
I thought you cared.
You took advantage of my pride and soul.
Everyone knew.
You told.
You bragged.
I hate you.
Yet in a way, I wanna hold you again.
You, you don't seem to care
You walk away.
Shaking ur head laughing.
That's okay because I know I'm better than u'll ever be.
Your scum.
If I knew this, I would have never talked to you.
I would have left you alone, because all in all ur trash!
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BrokenXbyManyX
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2006-04-16 15:48:33]
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Re: Die please so I can get on with my life!
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by luckedout on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 04:01:19 PM AEST
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=[ sorry to hear about the bad experience. I hate dudes like that. Just keep an eye out because youll find the person that will never treat you like crap and care for you with all their heart and soul, they do exist =] Good luck, keep writing
Mike |
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Re: Die please so I can get on with my life!
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by Shmokin on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 04:07:12 AM AEST
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| well expressed hurt and bitterness, well done :-) |
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Re: Die please so I can get on with my life!
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by big_B on
Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 03:53:02 PM AEST
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hey girl,
i read this up, and i can so relate to what you went through.
a girl crushed my heart before and it still hurts
great write |
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