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UNTITLED
Contributed by
jgb
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Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 02:36:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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It’s been a while
Why must it be me?
Making me cry
Will you make me see?
The wind does blow
Through
That tree
The others around
Nothing to see
Warm breeze felt
Whispers to me
Listening to the sounds
Of the night all around
Copyright ©
jgb
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2006-04-16 02:36:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: UNTITLED
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 10:48:44 AM AEST (User
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Lovely imagery....I thought it could have been expanded on though..
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