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invisible within
Contributed by
_unknown_
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Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 01:54:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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An unknown wanderer
shadowing the halls
screaming her loudest
with vacant calls
Step by step
she walks alone
her head is bowed
as she enters home
No recognition
shes even arrived
the loving she craves
is being denied
An empty hole
in which to fill
a smile emerges
pill after pill
No one will notice
no one will care
no one will realize
she's no longer there.
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2006-04-16 01:54:28]
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Re: invisible within
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 01:57:37 AM AEST
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| Know this feeling all to well. To this day I sometimes think that way but its getting a little bit better. Somebody will notice when you are gone. Hope things start looking up. Great write |
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Re: invisible within
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by JGB on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 02:11:36 AM AEST
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Been there done that still there sometimes. Don't know the situation. The pills a bad idea anyway you look at it, believe me!
This is a good write. Sometimes all you can do is write it down.
Love
Joanna
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Re: invisible within
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by Packatack on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 02:31:59 AM AEST
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| I like this poem...feel like that too even tho i'm a guy |
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