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HAUNTED
Contributed by
jgb
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Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 01:16:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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She is there
On the couch
I see her
I feel her
She is there
Then she is not
The memories
The thoughts
The love that was lost
Not lost,
There on the couch
Again, she is gone.
Leave me alone!
No!
Don’t go
I’ll get stoned
The bird has flown.
Copyright ©
jgb
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2006-04-16 01:16:30]
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Re: HAUNTED
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by FRANCO on
Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 12:30:24 AM AEST
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Friend your poem has a trendy presentation, Or rather a teenage passion. If that’s what you had in mind when you wrote it you have done a good job.
FRANCO
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Re: HAUNTED
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 06:38:27 AM AEST
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This reminds me of the times when I feel my mother is still with me and wanting her to stay for just that little bit longer.
Cool poem
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